It come from his heart,
Blood from his hand,
Red velvet crimson, thin,
His body made of glass,
So fragile and led astray,
So damaged with eyes unable to see
Reflected time… his life,
Fading away.
Amon-Re sang this weary song of love
The last time, the melody is lost,
Lyrics were forgotten, heartbroken,
Boundaries were crossed, betrayed.
He lay dying there upon the red
Torn between wrong and right,
Every dream he ever had, broken
When he ended his life for love,
One night.
Goodnight, my weary king,
Rest now, your journey has ended.
~
Inspired by “The Journal of Wall Grimm”
Amon-Re, A Novel
A fictional journal written by SAGE DOYLE
http://wp.me/p41c99-Ud
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That was wonderful
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Thank you…it goes to the tune of twinkle twinkle little star. It was for my little damaged underdog.
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It was very good 🙂
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Wow. that is wonderful coming from you. I know you are a profound lyricist. Honored. Thank you
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Me!!! I’m just an average Joe.
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Yeah right!
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🙂
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This is amazing! Thank you so much, I’m honored really. I’m going to reblog this. Thank you.
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Indeed of course, please. He captured my heart. And just wanted to say thank you for sharing him for awhile.
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I appreciate that, it’s a beautiful tribute. I’m deeply humbled, thank you 🙂
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It just poured out in minutes. Glad you like it. I think Amon-Re would have liked the attention.
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Yeah he would have, though he might not have felt worthy of it. He was a little self deprecating. Self defacating for that matter, to be crude lol. And I did, I love it.
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Reblogged this on "The Journal of Wall Grimm" and commented:
This is so humbling that someone would write these lyrics as a tribute to a character I wrote. Beautiful lyrics she says are to be sung to the tune of “Twinkle Twinkle Little Star” I’m dumbfounded by this compliment. Thank you so much, this is awesome!
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Once I began reading your story I could not stop.I was inspired. Thank you for sharing your novel with us. Love, C
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Thank you so much 🙂 It was exhilarating to finally put Amon-Re’s story out into the world.
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He is a miracle to have survived so long. He was a victim, poor baby.
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He was definitely a victim, absolutely.
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I tried smoking pencil shavings once. It made me dizzy.
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Well that’s a new one. I don’t think I’ll try that.
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This really is a fitting paean
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Reblogged this on mihran Kalaydjian.
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